The animation was great but I think you could work on your pacing and the voice acting sounded lacking ... like they were zero percent excited to be voice acting.
The animation was great but I think you could work on your pacing and the voice acting sounded lacking ... like they were zero percent excited to be voice acting.
I think you could work on making the characters fitting into the backgrounds more believable - the brightness make them stand out a lot. The rain also could use some improvement ... it wouldn't continuously come down in long lines. I get you can call these things stylistic choices but I'm trying to help you improve :)
Your good use of staging really helps the story. Good job :)
I was more doing the rain that way to emulate how it was done in a few times in Batman the Animated Series as well as to save me time due to the workload. I'll try to work on everything though!
I liked the owners face when he reacted to the dog. Good work.
Thanks!
The audio ties together well with the visuals to put the viewer in a bizarre space. Timing could use some tweaking - feels slow story and action wise.
I'm working on timing and a much more fast paced story, thanks for your comment!
Purty style and smooth animation. Noice.
Thank you!
I think the voice acting could use more inflection and I was not a fan of the art style ... sorry. Keep pumpin' ahead!
The voice acting was recorded live and I probably could've redone the lines, and as for the art style, I tried to do a sort of space ghost sort of thing, Thanks for the criticism!
I like the style! Smoothly animated too. Nice work.
Thanks!
I dig the style it's unique! Keep truckin :D
Thank you
Nice staging and art style!
Thanks mate!
One of my favorite animators :D
Glad to see you're still killing it.
Cheers man!
Monthly Animations on the 1st.
Age 32, Male
Animator
KCAI
St. Louis, Missouri
Joined on 4/11/14