Could use work on ... just about everything. Character design, voice acting, actual animation. Hey! You tried though! That's a thing ...
Could use work on ... just about everything. Character design, voice acting, actual animation. Hey! You tried though! That's a thing ...
I like the art style of the kid narrating. Good job overall too - it's obvious you put some time into it!
More of a slideshow than a film ... also try making your images not so fuzzy. That is just my opinion though-keep at it!
Awesome :) Usually not a fan of After Effects puppet animation but you pulled it off!
Well ... I sort of like the UPA style kitchen background.
That's about it.
Do something original.
Some ambient audio would tie this piece together ... feels a little disjointed.
Maybe is because I don't know how clean the music on the correct software hehehe
Those title screens take away from the animation and the goofy sound effects bother me ... but that's just my opinion.
Props for working in 3D!
Yeah i know. Everybody have own opinion. ;)
Anyway, thanks for comment.
Motion looks good for the most part ... there are a few awkward frames like the windup for the first punch. Try working on keeping your character's body weight consistent. Would love to see it with improvements!
Thank you for your feedback. I really appreciate it.
Super smooth animation <3
Thanks so much!! :D
Monthly Animations on the 1st.
Age 32, Male
Animator
KCAI
St. Louis, Missouri
Joined on 4/11/14